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I watch
Through the cracked glass
Of this broken mirror
I watch you cry
You sit there
Just sit
Tears flowing
I watch
I watch you fade
You sit there
Slowly losing any light you have left
Losing personality
Losing hope
I watch
I watch you hurt
You sit there
Screaming in agony
Begging for the pain to stop
Your own body torturing itself
I watch
I watch you die
You sit there
Chocking on your blood
Breathing your last
Your pulse slows
Your heart stops
I watch
I watch you dead
You lie there
Dead
On the floor
Surrounded by a pool of blood
Cold icy skin
Eyes lost their bright sparkle
I watch
I watch you
I watch you cry
I watch you hurt
I watch you die
I watch you dead
I watch
And Smile
:iconrainbow-masquerade:

Author's Comments

I'm really not sure what I think of this one...
Comments really appreciated!

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:iconcrazy-yaoi-freak:
Dude. That is amazing. I love it.

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I love you too much to let you go... But you don't love me enough to stay...
:iconvampyricreaper:
That was nice.. but.. it seems.. so.. Reece-ish... lol

Great work though!
:iconrainbow-masquerade:
Umm... Is that a compliment??
Btw Reece is Lisey right?
Because you guys always confuse me with the names and stuff....

Thanks :D

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I will not play at tug o war. I'd rather play at hug o war.
Where everyone hugs instead of tugs.
Where everyone giggles, and rolls on the rug.
Where everyone kisses, and everyone grins
and everyone cuddles and everyone wins

=Mental-IllnessClub
:iconrainbow-masquerade:
You really think so?
Thank you!! :D

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I will not play at tug o war. I'd rather play at hug o war.
Where everyone hugs instead of tugs.
Where everyone giggles, and rolls on the rug.
Where everyone kisses, and everyone grins
and everyone cuddles and everyone wins

=Mental-IllnessClub
:iconcrazy-yaoi-freak:
Your welcome. It's totally true. =)

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I love you too much to let you go... But you don't love me enough to stay...
:iconrainbow-masquerade:
:D
Thanks so much!!

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I will not play at tug o war. I'd rather play at hug o war.
Where everyone hugs instead of tugs.
Where everyone giggles, and rolls on the rug.
Where everyone kisses, and everyone grins
and everyone cuddles and everyone wins

=Mental-IllnessClub
:iconvampyricreaper:
Its a compliment
And yeah

Lol.. my bad.. its just.. habit to call ppl with lots of nicknames loll

np
:iconrainbow-masquerade:
Yay! thanks!

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I will not play at tug o war. I'd rather play at hug o war.
Where everyone hugs instead of tugs.
Where everyone giggles, and rolls on the rug.
Where everyone kisses, and everyone grins
and everyone cuddles and everyone wins

=Mental-IllnessClub
:iconstayintwisted:
I like this also

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hell girl I wouldn't keep offering to spend the rest of my life with you if I didn't value you a lot. :rose::rose::rose:

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